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By the last light - Chapter 1 by ~moonlit-forest:iconmoonlit-forest:



“Hey!” Frank shouted as he ran to catch up with Mikey and Gerard.
“Yo Frank!” Gerard said and gave him a light punch in the arm. Frank replied by giving him a kick in the shins.
“Oww!” Gerard squealed as he hopped on one foot and rubbed his sore leg. Then they carried on walking. When they eventually arrived at school it was about five minutes until the bell went so the boys grabbed one of the big radiators at the back of the hall and chatted.
“Hey, Mikes, I saw you staring at Alicia in History yesterday.” Frank said giving Mikey a small push.
“Was not!” Mikey replied defensively and started trying to push frank of the radiator. They carried on ‘tussling’ until the bell went and they trudged miserably into science class.
   Standing at the front was a blonde haired kid known as Bob, with a very cross looking teacher standing next to him.
“Right class, before we start I want to explain the mischief that this young man got up to before school today.” The teacher explained, pointing at Bob.
“Oh not again!” Mikey whispered to Frank behind his hand.
Frank just looked at Mikey with a small smile then turned back to the teacher. This made Mikey slightly annoyed and he thought to himself how Frank always got the good grades when Mikey almost always failed.
“This boy was unscrewed the whiteboard so when I came in to the class it almost fell on me. Not to mention the numerous times he had to be sent to the Principals office last week.”
Bob just stood there, expressionless, he didn’t look guilty but still everyone suspected him.
   At lunch Bob sat at the back of the hall away from everyone else. Silently eating his lunch with his shoulders hunched and his face down.
Gerard noticed this and was slightly disturbed by it.
“Hey! I know that Bob kid was always a bit of a loner but he was never this isolated!” He told the others.
“Yeah! I wonder what’s up?” frank replied looking at Bob with a puzzled expression.
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Well this is the first chapter of my fanfic i'm writing so tell me if its good and if i need to improve.
don't be afraid to criticise. i will take everything you say and improve.

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